ext_7345 ([identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shipperx 2007-10-12 03:14 pm (UTC)

You have SO got my attention.

The little details are so wonderful - I adore the way you focus in so sharply on the intensity of the fight and clash of weapons, and the wrists touching, before pulling back, almost like a camera would, to show us Spike's reaction, and then Buffy. Masterful! And I love the amount of time that's passed - I look forward to the inevitable catching-up conversation.

Lindsey is perfect. I now suspect shady motives and strange alliences in every faction - W&W, the Watcher's Council, all of it.

And Dawn the hostage. (Presumably, that is...?) Some things are classics for a reason. : )

Rockin' start!

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