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Moscow_Watcher (
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2008-08-10 02:19 pm (UTC)
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What a great chapter! Dana's flashback is clever and subtle, while action scene is vintage Spuffy!
I love this older and wiser Buffy; you write her easy to root for.
I cross my fingers in hope you'll continue writing this story.
Sorry for nitpicking, but I think I noticed a small typo
She'd faced worse consequences, had suffered greater
loses,
Do you mean "losses"?
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I love this older and wiser Buffy; you write her easy to root for.
I cross my fingers in hope you'll continue writing this story.
Sorry for nitpicking, but I think I noticed a small typo She'd faced worse consequences, had suffered greater loses,
Do you mean "losses"?