Date: 2008-08-10 02:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] moscow-watcher.livejournal.com
What a great chapter! Dana's flashback is clever and subtle, while action scene is vintage Spuffy!

I love this older and wiser Buffy; you write her easy to root for.

I cross my fingers in hope you'll continue writing this story.

Sorry for nitpicking, but I think I noticed a small typo She'd faced worse consequences, had suffered greater loses,

Do you mean "losses"?
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